The Hero’s Journey

_cokwr: Remember those Choose Your Own Adventure books they used to have at the library? Well, let's do something like that. We’re going to tell the journey of a storybook hero. We won’t give him/her a name, or go into specifics like that. We’re not going to get bogged down on the details. Try to use archetypes and motifs that are recognizable, but it is up to you whether or not you want to make a comment on the accepted norms of fairy tales by breaking them. Start with a picture from Flickr. It can be random or deliberate, as long as it's not All Rights Reserved. Narrate the step of his/her journey, adding what details you will, but staying true to the plot. Comment on the step prior with a link to your step, so there is a clean series of narrative frames, each linking to the next. If there be multiple paths, then we will have a tree of potential outcomes for our hero. You may also start a new story if you wish. Also, please post a link to the step prior so that a reader can backtrack if they get lost or stumble upon a middle step. In summary the strict limitations: -You MUST have an image -Narrate in first person so gender can be generally overlooked. -Post a link to the step prior for backtracking purposes., _cpzh4: Visual, _cre1l: http://blog.houseoftheabsurd.net/archives/150, _chk2m: Tempest, _ciyn3: 45, _ckd7g: , _clrrx: , _cztg3:

Hero’s Journey part 6: Unearthly Song

For the version of part 5 that precedes this one, go to MauveShirt’s blog post. For the first part of this story, go here.

White Pigeons Photo by Sanews

I was horribly confused. “Did you not come from the Silver Well?”

She shook her head and said with a strange glint in her eyes, “That was the Sacred Well. The Silver Well leads to the other side of the world.”

I asked her, “How do you know this?”

“The bird sang it to me.”

She took me by the hand and we began to walk. The armor was silent now, like the woods. My sister bounced and giggled, sometimes letting go of my hand to pick a sweetly-scented flower. After a bit of walking and gathering, she began to weave a net out of the long stems, tied together like the daisy chains of her true childhood.

Her wild song, hummed under her breath, grew louder and louder as we walked. I finally realized that my sister had not been humming. The sharp music took on a cadence of a dance and it surrounded us like water.

We had reached a clearing. Silver birds sat, ornament-like on the trees around us. They sang a song of such clarity and beauty, a song of knowledge that I wept at, for I could not understand the language. My sister sat down and watched them, rapt. Her hands were the only things that moved, continuing to weave her net of flowers. I cannot say how long we stayed there, distracted from our quest as we listened to the most beautiful sound I have ever heard.

With a piercing WRAAAACK, a discordant cry that set my teeth on edge, a huge black bird swept down amongst them. The silver birds kept singing, but tried to move out of the way. It snatched up one, who made a single sound of distress before being eaten alive. It went for another one, a courageous fellow who had attempted to knock it off the branch while it had dealt with the other. This one too disappeared down the cavernous gullet. The beating of its wings made the black bird’s chest ripple as it set upon a third.

My sister yelled something and jumped to her feet- we humans are so very slow when it comes to reacting. She threw up her net and I leaped forward to help her. Between us, we captured the black bird and hauled it to the ground. Once it knew it had been caught, it stopped fighting.

She tied the net closed around it with deft little hands while I watched, my revulsion at the creature making my mouth sour.

The Hero’s Journey Part 6: Following more light (Reverend lineage)

This is the Jim Groom lineage, please read Part 5: The Tunnel before this one. If you would like to start from the beginning, please click here.

Famous Hags of Filmland
((Photo credit to Glamhag))

Knife glinting with the torchlight in one hand, the burning branch in the other, I walked down the tunnel. The floor was smooth after a point, which indicated that the tunnel had been much used, or man-made. Or, perhaps, both.

I followed it cautiously, remembering that I needed to think of not only myself, but my sister as well.

The light grew. It wasn’t a light I had ever seen before. It played off the walls of the cave with a purple dance that made me halt to watch it. It seemed to condense into figures, familiar figures though it felt like it had been an eternity.

The scene, pulled from purple light, began with a room. A man was sitting by a bedside, putting a hand to his wife’s forehead. He shook his own head. He left that room (which disappeared as he moved) and stood under a tree, smoking. In silence, a bird flew into the tree above him and he appeared to watch it. The man went back into his house and stood in front of four children. Each of these he sent out in turn.

The scene melted, then was reconstructed into the man’s bedroom again. Several people stood around the bed now, one a doctor. He was busy talking to the man as the others placed flowers on a table and held the woman’s hand as she remained motionless aside from the slight heaving of her chest for breathing.

I jumped as a creaking old voice said, “You shall not watch any longer.”

I whirled around. A bent old hag was standing there, staring at me with flat blue eyes. Stupidly, for I was too startled to think of anything else, I asked, “Why?”

She replied in a voice that sounded like a thousand creaking hinges, “What right do you have to the future, you who are going to live it? You may have the past and the present, unless you wish to trade them for something, but you cannot have the future. Not yet.”

Hero’s Journey Part 4:

Read Jenn’s Part Three before this one!

Bird Statue
I moved my arms and legs. They seemed whole, unbroken. My knife was still with me.

When I rose to my feet, it felt like I had aged centuries. I looked at my hands, but they were still as they had been when I left my father’s house. I blinked and tried to accustom myself to movement in a lateral plane.

I cannot say how long I walked in that forest, my feet falling on plants that smelled like resin. Stillness reigned over that wood, and its silence stole the sound of my own breathing as the green carpet stole the sound of my footfalls.

At length, I came upon a slight figure sitting on a stump. I approached and the child asked me, “If a tree falls in this forest, would it make a sound?”

I laughed and my voice startled me. The girl said, “I thought so. You look familiar. Have we met?”

I answered, “No. I am a stranger to these parts. Have I reached the other side of the world?”

“I’m afraid not. Have a seat and I will tell you a story.”

I sat on a clover patch and listened to her piping voice.

“I have three siblings and we were sent out on a quest to find something of great importance. I went West, following the sun. As a token for my journey, I received a mirror that was said to be magic. As night fell, the full moon’s light glinted off of my mirror and caught the attention of a silver bird. I followed it to a well.

“This well was made of silver and of light and the bird disappeared into it. I lowered myself in the bucket for a long, long time. During this, I could hear the bird singing. The song went something like-” At this point she tried to hum something, but it was too wild and too soft for me to get any sense of the tune.

“When the bucket hit the bottom of the well, I was greeted by seven silver soldiers. They told me that I was trespassing on the soil beneath the Sacred Well. If I wished to live, I would return the way I came. I tried, but the bucket broke. They tried to kill me, but I used the mirror to bounce light into their eyes. They were blinded and I scrambled about, calling here and there. They, trying to hit me, hit each other instead and fell like shards to the ground.

“I left them and continued on, searching for the silver bird. And that is what I am doing.”

I realized then that this girl was my sister, somehow transformed into a child.

The Hero’s Journey Part One: Leaving home

"Hidden Home" Ithaca, NY, designed by Helen Binkerd Young, graduate of Cornell's architecture program ...

I left home when I was 16. My mother had fallen grievously ill and one night my father was out smoking his pipe and he saw a silver bird alight in the holly tree above him.

It told him the only cure was to find the Root of Life, located on the other side of the world.

He called the four of us into the kitchen and said, “My children, you being young and healthy, the lights of my waning years, I bear a heavy weight in my chest for I fear I have to send you out into the world. You well know that your mother is ill, that the pall of death is cast over her. This night I have received a message from on high that her salvation may be found on the other side of the earth.”

He took my brother aside and spoke to him first. I did not hear what he said, or what he handed to my brother.

After their conversation, my father sent him to the North.

I, the second child, spoke with my father next. He bequeathed to me a knife, given to him by his uncle. He told me it had properties that would help me on my journey. He sent me to the South.

Looking back at the house from the bottom on the hill, I saw him speak to the second youngest and send her to the West. The youngest he sent to the East.

This is the beginning of the story. Write the next part and post the link to this post with it, then post the link to your part as a comment and we’ll keep this going. Or you can follow whatever links already exist and add onto those threads of narration! Rules: Post a picture with your part of the story (Creative Commons, plz) and please narrate in first person.